Girl Help? Women's advice preferably! 10 Points For Best Answer!!!?

Bellow is the letter I would like to give my very good friend that I recently went to prom with this past Friday. We had a great night and I expressed my feeling in this. Do you think it is a idea? Her B-day is about a week and I was gonna write this in the card. Any input would be greatly appreciated. Also is the poem better with or without the 6th stanza? someone said it would make her feel more guilty...





Dear ______,





Hope that prom was as fun for you as it was for me. I had such a great time with you and I can't wait to see you again. I have been thinking a lot lately about you and I must say that I am having trouble putting how I feel into words, so I thought that my thoughts would come out better on paper. So I decided to write you a poem to tell you how I feel.





If you're reading this


then that must mean,


I`ve worked up the courage


that was unseen.





Upon pondering love


I came to find,


that you were what


came to my mind.





So, I`m here to ask


if you like me so;


there's only two answers:


yes or no.





If it`s no,


then don`t mind me,


dreaming of how


I wish it could be.





If it`s no,


turn me away,


knowing I`ll find


true love someday.





If it`s no,


I`ll realize,


there was never anything


within your eyes.





But, if it`s yes,


tears I will shed-


tears of joy


and not of dread.





It feels good to finally get this down on paper, these thoughts have been flying around my head for a while now and it feels better to get them out into the open. If you don't


feel the same don't be weirded out by this.





Cereally, (This is an inside joke we have)


NickGirl Help? Women's advice preferably! 10 Points For Best Answer!!!?
awww, you are a true romantic!








babe, she'll love this! she'll love every bit of this!!!!





just a head's up...








a guy i liked told me he loved me soo out of the blue...well we were alone in his car..








sweetie, when he said that i couldnt say anything and i never did...2 yrs gone by...but i love him with all my heart...been thinking about him the whole 2 yrs...








he's been thinkin of me too..


we love each other for sure now...





odd but true story...if she doesnt say anything right off, dont give your hopes up.





we girls are shy inside.......and we just need time to process.





*just a warning . but she will loooove you!Girl Help? Women's advice preferably! 10 Points For Best Answer!!!?
If she likes you, she is going to feel very special. Its a sweet thing to do. You are taking a risk, and she would appreciate it. Do it if you think she likes you. Good luck.
Thats really good, awh.





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wow....amazing!
awww this is really cute. if u really like her then u should give it to her in her card or whatever
aww i think thats cute....i would go w/o the 6th verse tho
That is a really sweet letter. I'm sure she will love it.
just do what ever your heart tells you to do. Love Life and Enjoy
I KNOW I WOULD BE FLOORED EITHER WAY YOU SEEM LIKE A SWEET GUY AND I WISH YOU ALLLLL THE LUCK AND I HOPE IT WORKS OUT FOR YOU...... IF NOT DON'T LET YOURSELF DOWN YOU SOUND LIKE A GOOD GUY JUST BE PATIENT AND LET IT COME TO YOU... GOOD LUCK... AND YOU SHOULD POST SOMETHING ON HERE NEXT WK LETTING PEOPLE KNOW WHAT HAPPEND I WILL BE SO CURIOUS TO KNOW
do not send her the poem. I repeat DO NOT send the poem!!! It is a really cute well written poem, but if her answere is no (which hopefully it wont be) you will make it very hard for her to respond to you. I would keep it more simple like the first two stanzas then change it to something short and sweet, No making her feel bad.
I'm just speaking constructively and don't mean this to be offensive, but I think you should reconsider this a little bit. You might scare her away as the feeling conveyed in the poem is that you are rather serious and intent. I think that the 6th stanza is a little harsh, as though to say that if she doesn't like you she has no substance, while the 7th stanza is a little intense and I think will certainly scare her. I think you would be better off taking a more casual approach saying that you really love her as a friend, but want more. The poem is very sweet but I think she'll be scared off and might take it the wrong way. Good Luck ;)